Howdy. I'd be interested in some critique of my CV. It's my second draft, so I know there's a lot more I could do with it. Compared with a lot of the applicants I've seen so far, I know I'm risking coming off as rather boring or too bookish/technical for the job (well-rounded people and all)...

Howdy everyone. I'm an incoming first year undergraduate. At the moment I'm juggling all the work my university has given me to do before I even start (around a dozen books, a tonne of worksheets, and a full-on essay) whilst attempting to get myself in a decent enough state to start applying...