CHECK MY CV PLEASE

[TP941]

I'm applying for corporate finance summer internships mostly M&A and the odd DCM

 

[Mr. Exclusive1]

I have some other comments for your CV but first I want you to do this:

Watch

And then align your dates correctly on the right.

 

[TP941]

I have some other comments for your CV but first I want you to do this:

Watch

And then align your dates correctly on the right.

thanks a lot, I did that! any other suggestions/comments?

 

[Mr. Exclusive1]

thanks a lot, I did that! any other suggestions/comments?

I actually like the rest of your CV - I think the layout etc. is fine and everything.

I think some of the content is a bit generic in places. For example, for SWs, it's quite generic and for your VP position it is also quite generic.

For example, with HSBC, it would be great if you could tell us what case study you actually worked on, what was your contribution and what did you learn? And then also mention what valuation techniques you actually learnt and how you could apply those?

Do you see what I mean? I feel like this applies to your all your SW points. It just doesn't really say very much and you should quite honestly, milk it for everything you can get.