CV - Spring Weeks - Potential advice..

[John Peterson1]

Hello guys, attached my SW CV.. Please could you comment for improvements, would be much appreciated..

 

[John Peterson1]

Any advice would be helpful guys! cheers

 

[Trigger1]

Shorten your bullets / make them concise. Remove dates on the right, the days are not needed.

Feel like the whole CV can be trimmed down by a lot.

Learning to code via interactive web sites is a pretty lame interest and also pay attention to wording "Technical Skills: Programming languages in Python and Java"

 

[John Peterson1]

What if I trimmed down the CV via bullet points, what do you think of it overall? etc

& thanks for the feedback mate.

 

[Trigger1]

It's not bad.

 

[John Peterson1]

okay cheers, with regards to the spelling and the wording. That's all changed now, what else would you recommend me to add? Also with the dates and months, I've deleted the days and left the months is that fine?

Finally would you think this is good enough to land a spring week in BO tech?

 

[Trigger1]

Yeah I think so. But your bullets could be much stronger.

 

[John Peterson1]

With regards to my Fujitsu work exp? How do you mean, could you give me one example please if possible?

 

[paco rabanne1]

As above

 

[paco rabanne1]

regardless, well done!

 

[mymymymymy1]

What was your result?

 

[John Peterson1]

Applying this year mate, haven't applied yet.

 

[John Peterson1]

@Trigger

 

[John Peterson1]

@Trigger - Could you please give me an example of how I can shorten the CV bullet points? and make it more concise - Thanks!

 

[wolfofwilkins1]

Well done