fredstan50141
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Hi. Thank you very much for the feedback. I am going to start applying as soon as I have sorted out my CV.
Yes that was meant to be a CV but it has not been checked properly by my university tutor. I used the website @lofaszjoska put up and have tried again.
Thanks for the honesty, I would much rather be told that it is terrible than send it off thinking it was fine. How is this?
- include the city where you have been in Malawi (just for consistency)
- not sure if you should use capitals at "a Corporate Finance analyst"?
- write 'Elementary' French/Spanish and then 'Basic' LaTeX/SAGE competencies -> looks better this way
- each bulletpoint is a concise selling point; and only one sentence (there are parts where you have used two)
- other may disagree with this but I wouldn't explicitly say in a resume that you have "improved communication skills/organization/any other interpersonal skills". I think the right way to do it is through giving objective facts of the experience - anyone looking at your resume will be surely able to tell what kind of skills you might have gained by that exp.
- Just two examples: "Met with people from M&A, Leveraged Finance, Risk, Debt and Corporate Finance" / "Unloading, packing and wrapping goods" -> these tell me nothing exact. See where im going wth this?
- keep working on the content and give your experiences more thought, your almost there.
Let @Mr. Exclusive chime in on this one.Hi. Have been away but been working on the CV a bit. How should I put my A levels in? And I can't find a way to make the meeting a single sentence otherwise it becomes too general?
Thanks.
Ok I think I have my final version. Any final thoughts?