Hot!
- simply write "Expected 2016"
- Remove: "Microsoft Office PowerPoint, Excel (pivot tables, lookups, macros), Outlook, Word" and "
(team won prizes in a sponsored competition)"
Really it's good, perhaps bulletpoints could be a bit more punchy but you'll be allright. Good stuff.
If you identify me based on this, well done and let me know that you did
Just on a side note I'm not sure why it's a problem if someone identifies you? You made a single post so far, don't work in the industry and you have (correctly) blacked out the sections that you had so it's not obvious who you are. You just asked for help.
Also just on a side note, do you mind elaborating what went wrong with your summer AC (so that our community could learn from it)?