1; Just put French (and Hindi) down as an interest and mention you are also a course rep for French only during interviews.
2; That being said, remove the Languages section, there's 0 point in lisiting you are fluent in English
3; Give your interests section thought and edit it. Who isn't interested in these things: Tech, Reading, Cricket? Also not sure what you meant by listing "Tech" and "Cricket" as an interest.
4. earned 39 proficiency badges as part of my school’s girl guides’ company -> is this something really good? I'm not familiar wtih this.
5. Remove Student Helper as well, adds 0 value. (just one example: Drew on personal experiences to provide prospective students with insight about life at university -> what this bullet is supposed to tell me about how you'll be a great future colleague to work with? absolutely nothing)
Go into more details in your bullets and work on them further. Feel free to upload your next version once you are done.