Shred my CV!

[Rv931]

Hey guys, I've recently just discovered this website but wished I had discovered it so much sooner!!
I'm trying to get into Investment banking, I've applied to most Spring weeks but I really think my CV wasn't up to scratch so I've amended it.
I would really appreciate it if you could shred my CV, I've looked through most of the other threads and tried to take in all the feedback and made my CV accordingly.

All criticism welcome!

 

[mUkKa1]

Dates aren't consistent, some of the brackets are made bold, spacing is fucked up at places, etc. The type of bullet design that you are using are not consistent either. I definitely feel that the bullets are too long, cut them down. Quality-wise they are not that bad, but sometimes sound as a bit informal.