SW CV shred

[Superman71911]

Really appreciate the support, be as brutally honest as needed
Looking to apply for spring weeks this year

 

[Superman71911]

pls

 

[Trigger1]

Be more specific in your bullets.
Quantify your achievements if you can. Otherwise it's not bad.

 

[Superman71911]

Thanks for your reply, what do you mean, can you give an example?

 

[Trigger1]

here goes a few examples
• Recruited over 50 members to the society through in school advertisement
- what was your role? did you create the ad?
• Analysed MPC reports on the state of the UK economy to produce a presentation
- 'produced' (prepare is a better word) a presentation on what exactly? what analysis did you carry out?
• Presented our findings to employees of the Bank of England
- what findings? your bullets are rather short, and not concise enough ("employees of the Bank of England is irrelevant here)
• Communicated effectively with team members to meet deadlines
- this is very generic

 

[Superman71911]

ahh i see, thank you very much

 

[ShittyBanker1]

Be more specific in your bullets.
Quantify your achievements if you can. Otherwise it's not bad.

This and increase the size of your name

 

[faaf1]

great one!