Please review my CV for Spring week Applications

[SSSSSS1]

Please help

If I do apply to the specialised spring weeks i.e Goldman Sachs, I will be targeting the IBD division.

Many Thanks

 

[Trigger1]

http://canarywharfian.co.uk/threads/3-quick-things.111/

 

[SSSSSS1]

http://canarywharfian.co.uk/threads/3-quick-things.111/

Was that message generic or specific? I feel I've done all three but I'll definitely re-do if you feel its necessary.

 

[Trigger1]

Was that message generic or specific? I feel I've done all three but I'll definitely re-do if you feel its necessary.

Yep you should go into more details with the existing reviews first.

 

[SSSSSS1]

Yep you should go into more details with the existing reviews first.

I feel I've made some improvements, please tell me what you think.

 

[Trigger1]

I still don't like the format at all, take the time and research previous threads. You absolutely need to reformat the last part (Skills act interests)

Bulletpoints are weak, work them. Again, plenty of advice in previous threads.

Remove "references available...", you don't need it there.

Also remove that committe student thing altogether.

 

[MmM1]

What is your opinion on putting the most relevant work experience at the top of your "work experience" section and ignoring the rule where you have to put your most recent experience at the top?

I found this advice on Mergers and Inquisitions and I was wondering.....

 

[Trigger1]

IMO it should be always most recent up top just to keep the consistency (as it's also in a chronological order in your edu section). It's not to say you couldn't do otherwise, it really won't make a difference.

 

[hitchensism1]

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