Spring Week CV..

[John Peterson1]

Much appreciated guys.. Would be useful for some feedback with regards to this.

Best!

 

[Fishy1]

"Enhanced interpersonal skills in a team to contribute to Fujitsu’s department in which support Morrison’s IT infrastructure and participated in a timed problem-solving group exercise "

Doesn't really make sense, you should rephrase this point and try to emphasis what you achieved in your 'group exercise'.

Also, "optimised workflow by 15%" - how did you come up with that number?

Rest looks good but I suggest removing your GCSEs.

 

[John Peterson1]

Rephrased that sentence, thanks for that!

I'm aiming for BO Tech, do you think this CV will be good enough?

Much appreciated.

@Fishy

 

[Fishy1]

Rephrased that sentence, thanks for that!

I'm aiming for BO Tech, do you think this CV will be good enough?

Much appreciated.

@Fishy

Glad to help.

No idea, I'm the wrong person to ask.

 

[John Peterson1]

@Fishy Could you please look at my covering letter for Credit Suisse if possible?

 

[Fishy1]

@Fishy Could you please look at my covering letter for Credit Suisse if possible?

Sure.

 

[John Peterson1]

@Fishy - Messaged you mate, thank you again in advance..

 

[mojod1]

your work experience is really impressive man!